Dramatic Flare

It's been quite awhile since I've finished a drawing and uploaded it. Hope it was worth it. Spent a total of about 4-5 hours on it; tried doing something new with coloring and I kinda like it.

Original sketch here:
[link]

I'm not too happy about the background but I wasn't entirely sure what to do. Also, this little lady needs a name but I can't figure out what. I was thinking Victoree but that seems a bit... over the top.

Also, her lips turned out way too polished but I'm having issues changing that. Oh well.

Per the advice in the comments, I tried making the gun have a more obtuse angle and I think it did work out a lot better. The gun got shrunk down in the process, but hey. I also made a few minor corrections to her face and hands.

If you want to compare it to the original, you can: [link]

Btw, I did come up with a name for her. Maejorie DuBois. Goes by Mae.